PASSIVE VOICE

PASSIVE VOICE

·         KICK

Active             : The man is kicking the ball now

Passive            : The ball is being kicked now

·         PUSH

Active             : jhon push cupboard

Passive            : cupboard is pushed by jhon

·         KISS

Active             : jhon is kiss marry

Passive            : marry is kissed by jhon

·         SCRATCH

Active             : Jhon is scratch screen TV

Passive            : Screen TV was scratch by jhon.

·         THROW

Active             : She throws me with sandal

Passive            : I am thrown by her with sandal

·         BLOW

Active             : Harris blow balloon

Passive            : Balloon is blown by harris.

·         READ

Active             : Jhon reads the book

Passive            : The book is read by jhon.

·         CUT

Active             : harris had been cutting the grass

Passive            : The grass had been being cut by harris

·         FLY

Active             : Kiki has Flight the aircraft

Passive            : The aircraft has been flight by Kiki.

·         DRIVE

Active             : Ikhwal has driven the car.

Passive            : The car has been driven by ikhwal.

·         RIDE

Active             : Kiki is riding a motorcycle

Passive            : The motorcycle is being ridden by kiki

·         BUY

Active             : She bought 2 kilograms of apples

Passive            : 2 kilograms of apples were bought by her

·         TELL

Active             : Mother told bed time stories

Passive            : Bed time stories was told by mother

·         BRING

Active             : Avin brought the English dictionary.

Passive            : The English dictionary was brought by Avin.

·         TEACH

Active             : mr. izzy taught English

Passive            : English was taught by mr. izzy

Analysis of character in Sthephenie miyer's novel

An Analysis of character in Sthephenie miyer's novel

CHAPTER I

INTRODUCTION

A.      The Background of the Study

There are a lot of definitions of literature. Some short explanation on it would be useful for you. Very often it simply means anything that is written:  time tables, dialogues, textbooks, travel brochures and so on. If you are thinking of buying a bicycle or a motorcycle or a washing machine, you will probably want to see the literature about it. If you are medical student, you will have to read the literature about surgery. An advertisement for soap is as much literature as Shakespeare’s plays or Dickens’s novels. So, we may conclude all written materials, like this general grouping: historical books, magazines, newspapers, dictionaries, novels, catalog, plays, short stories, encyclopedias, etc. We can divide this large mass of material into two different groups. The first one mainly presents information and the next mainly gives some entertainment. Most definitions of literature have been criteria definitions, definitions based on a list of criteria which all literary works must meet. However, more current theories of meaning take the view that definitions are based on prototypes: there is broad agreement about good examples that meet all of the prototypical characteristics, and other examples are related to the prototypes by family resemblance. For literary works, prototypical characteristics include careful use of language, being written in a literary genre (poetry, prose fiction, or drama), being read aesthetically, and containing many weak Implicate.

 Although the literature review is a widely recognized genre of scholarly writing, there is no clear understanding of what constitutes a body of literature. Each reviewer must decide which specific studies to include or exclude from a review and why. And each such decision alters the character of the set as a whole and could also therefore alter the net conclusions drawn from the set. In this article, I examine a number of examples of inclusion and exclusion decisions and illustrate how they affect the resulting bodies of literature. For purposes of illustration, I draw on literature examining the relationship between teachers qualifications and the quality of their teaching practice.

Moody (1987) writes that literature springs from our in born love of telling a story, of arranging words in pleasing patterns, of expressing in words some special aspects of our human experience.

Boulton (1980) defines literature from a functional perspective as the imaginative work that gives us R’s: recreation, recognition, revelation and redemption.

Rees (1973), after describing what he regarded as literature, summed up that literature is a permanent expression in words of some thoughts or feelings in ideas about life and the world.

Absurd, Literature of the. The term is applied to a number of works in drama and prose fiction which have in common the sense that the human condition is essentially absurd, and that this condition can be adequately represented only in works of literature that are themselves absurd. Both the  mood and dramatically of absurdity were anticipated as early as 1896 I Alfred Jarry's French play Ubu roi {Ubu the King). The literature has its roots also in  the movements of expressionism and surrealism, as well as in the fiction, written in the 1920s, of Franz Kafka (The Trial, Metamorphosis).

Fiction is a form of literature that’s is written based on imagination or taken from a true story. Fiction has been existed hundred years ago. The Greeks, for example, had bequeath myths and legend which belong to kinds of fiction besides novel, short story, poetry and drama.

Now day, novel as one the fiction works attracts readers attention rather than the other fiction works. Novel itself is defined by Raplh and Stanton as a prose fiction of considerable length showing character in action, and capable of greater complexity in both character and plot than the short story; moreover, they said that novel is a book length piece of imaginative fiction.

To study novel profoundly, people should know some aspects of the novel such as theme, plot, characterization, point of view, style, tone, language, setting, and character. These are the intrinsic element that very central in the novel to describe story and make the story alive.

The novel is a literary form that is most popular in the world. This literary form most widely published and most widely circulated, because extensive community power in society

The novel is a work of literature that has two elements, namely: the retreat of intrinsic and extrinsic elements are related because both are very influential in the presence of a literary work.

A fictitious prose narrative of book length, typically representing character and action with some degree of realism: a fictitious prose narrative of considerable length and complexity, portraying characters and usually presenting a sequential organization of action and scenes.

A novel is a long written story about imaginary people and events. Novel things are new and different from anything that has been done, experienced, or made before. A novel is a long narrative that is normally in prose, which describes fictional characters and events, usually in the form of a sequential story. Novel an extended work in prose, either fictitious or partly so, dealing with character, action, thought, etc, esp in the form of a story.

A novel is a book containing a long story about imaginary people and events  a novel by a famous author novel, an invented prose narrative of considerable length and a certain complexity that deals imaginatively with human experience, usually through a connected sequence of events involving a group of persons in a specific setting.

Novel in its broadest sense, a novel is any extended fictional prose narrative focusing on a few primary characters but often involving scores of secondary characters. The fact that it is in prose helps distinguish it from other lengthy works like epics. We might arbitrarily set the length at 50,000 words or more as a dividing point with the novella . and the short story. The English novel is primarily thought of as a product of the eighteenth-century, though many earlier narratives in classical Greek such as Heliodorus's Aethiopica and Daphnis and Chloë (attributed to Longus) easily fulfill the normal requirements of the genre, as the scholar Edmund Gosse has pointed out. Likewise, the Japanese Tale of the Genji and collected writings of Murasaki Shikibu from 1004 CE would clearly qualify as well by our definition--though most Western scholars treat these works as separate from the novel genre because historically they do not play a direct part or direct influence in the evolution of the popular English novel genre today.

Novel is a piece of prose fiction of a reasonable length. Even a definition as toothless as this, however, is still too restricted. Not all novels are written in prose. There are novels in verse, like Pushkin’s Eugene Onegin or Vikram Seth’s The Golden Gate. As for fiction, the distinction between fiction and fact is not always clear. And what counts as a reasonable length? At what point does a novella or long short story become a novel? André Gide’s The Immoralist is usually described as a novel, and Anton Chekhov’s ‘The Duel’ as a short story, but they are both about the same length. The truth is that the novel is a genre which resists exact definition.

Novel a long fictional prose narrative. It was the form's close relation to real life that differentiated it from the chivalric romance; in most European languages the equivalent term is roman, indicating the proximity of the forms. In English, the term emerged from the Romance languages in the late fifteenth century, with the meaning of "news"; it came to indicate something new, without a distinction between fact or fiction. Although there are many historical prototypes, so-called "novels before the novel", the modern novel form emerges late in cultural history—roughly during the eighteenth century. Initially subject to much criticism, the novel has acquired a dominant position among literary forms, both popularly and critically.

In the research , the writer takes one of those intrinsic elements, namely character that will be analyzed. Character is a fiction representation of a person. A role of a character in story is totally absolute. Thus, a story could not be called as a story without any character. The presence of character makes a story completely become clear.

Character is : the way someone thinks, feels, and behaves : someone's personality The combination of qualities or features that distinguishes one person,group, or thing from another. the group of qualities that make a person, group, or thing different from others : the bodily expression (as eye color or leaf shape) of the action of a gene or group of genes.

character - an imaginary person represented in a work of fiction (play or film or story); character - a characteristic property that defines the apparent individual nature of something; character - the inherent complex of attributes that determine a persons moral and ethical actions and reactions; character - an actor's portrayal of someone in a play; character - a person of a specified kind (usually with many eccentricities); "a real character"; "a strange character"; "a friendly eccentric"; "the capable type"; "a mental case" character - a formal recommendation by a former employer to a potential future employer describing the person'squalifications and dependability; character - a written symbol that is used to represent speech.

This novel which is discussed in analysis written by Stephenie Meyer entitled Twilight the first novel in the Twilight Saga. Twilight is a young-adult vampire-romance novel by authorStephenie Meyer. It is the first book of the Twilight series, and introduces seventeen-year-old Isabella "Bella" Swan, who moves fromPhoenix, Arizona to Forks, Washington and finds her life in danger when she falls in love with a vampire, Edward Cullen. The novel is followed by New Moon, Eclipse, and Breaking Dawn.

When first published in hardback in 2005, it reached No. 5 on the New York Times Best Seller list within a month of its release and eventually reached No. 1.That same year, Twilight was named one ofPublishers Weekly's Best Children's Books of 2005. The novel was also the biggest selling book of 2008 and the second biggest selling of 2009, only behind its sequel New Moon. It has been translated into 37 different languages.

When first published, Twilight gained mostly positive reactions. Critics often described it as a "dark romance that seeps into the soul" and praised it for capturing "perfectly the teenage feeling of sexual tension and alienation". On the other hand, in more recent reviews, some critics thought that Bella's appeal to Edward was "based on magic rather than character" and that Bella is a weak female character.

A film adaptation of Twilight was released in 2008. It was a commercial success, grossing more than $392 million worldwide and an additional $157 million from North American DVD sales, as of July 2009.

The story of Bella Swan and her vampire lover, Edward Cullen. The novel explores Bella's choice between her love for Edward and her friendship with werewolf Jacob Black, along with her dilemma of leaving mortality behind in a terrorized atmosphere, a result of mysterious vampire attacks in Seattle. This novel tells  about Bella Swan and the Cullen family. Bella has spent a good amount of time  with the Cullens and has not only fully accepted that they are vampire, but has  decided that she is going to be one of them soon, whether her boyfriend Edward  wants her to be a vampire or not. This novel indicates that there is love story experienced by a woman and also about her life she chooses, and about the conflict among the characters. As a human who must decide between her love and her life becomes a human or a vampire and lives with her boyfriend, Edward and sacrifice to leave her best friend, Jacob whom truly loves her and had to leave her father whose named Charlie. Bella is not willing to lose with her best friend Jacob,that makes her confused in her life. This is the conflict of the main character, Bella, Edward  her boyfriend and Jacob her best friend. The writer choose this novel because the writer wanted to analyze the character in the ”twilight”.

B.       The Problem of  the Study

Based on the background of the analysis above,the writer points out that  problems of the analysis are :

1. who is character protagonist, antagonist, flat, round, ID, ego and                                  superego “Twilight”?

2. How are the main characters facing their problem in the novel “Twilight”

C.      The objective of the study

Every analysis has certain purpose of objective to be obtained and avoid deviation from what has been planned. The objective this analysis are to explain the character of each chapter in Stephenie Meyer’s novel “Twilight” and explain how author show the conflict in this novel using sociological approach.

D.      The benefit of study

The benefit at the analysis are :

1. For writer :

A. To get good qualification of the final task

B. To improve to ability in writing

C. To get knowledge in understanding literature deeply

2. To reader :

A. To understand what the character is.

B. Know the conflict of the novel.

C. To get knowledge in society and how to respect each other in                                human life.

E.       The formulation of the study

Based on the background of the problem and the limitation of problems above, the writer can formulate the problem “ An analysis of character in Stephenie Meyer novel Twilight”.

Drama 5 Persons

DRAMA

Dreama 5 Persons

My hero is my daddy
One day there was a father who had three daughters and their mother is not there since their elementary school. Their father named Haryadi, the first child named Elis, second and third Emi Intan. The three girls have different characters. elis is ignorant and a woman bodo but forgetful. emi is a pious woman and child who was always proud parents, diamond is an arrogant son, glamor and naughty. In the morning.

Intan: Dady, dady.when I go to the shopping mall, I SAW the PRADA brand new bag from the price not expensive, I want it. Please dady.
Father: what? Actually you bought last week the new bag from harlem brand right ??
Intan: OMG my dady hunny, not Harlem but Hermes. Oh you make-your daughter shame.
Father: whatever the brand of honey, you have a lot of bag do not buy it again.
Emi: assalamualaikum daddy, hey diamond this afternoon my friend PBUH you in the mall. Is it right ??
Intan: yeah, I look around the new bag, so many discount for today. But our daddy did not want to buy it for me. He is like a human Stingy beside of our house.
emi: maybe our dady bussy about his job, so he is still unfocussed. Where is el ??
Father: ell, wake up baby, now already 3:00 pm and you are still sleeping.
El: oh dady, I am still sleepy.
Father: el wake up, please make a tea for me.
El: ok dady, ouch I am still sleepy but my handsome father very noisy like a vocalist of the band.
Father: thank you dear. what is this? really salty.
El: oh my god. I am forget, it's salt.
Intan: omg el, you are a woman you must know what is the different of sugar and salt.
Emi: focus, focus, focus eelllll ... ..
Father: go to take a bath now el.
El: I am sorry dady ,.

(The next day) at daytime Haryadi received a telephone call from a bank. After the death of his wife Haryadi rare focus and rarely pay attention to his business, to attempt much in corruption by its own employees, but he was unconscious and suddenly he got a bill from a bank loan that he paid.

Bank: hello good afternoon,
Haryadi: noon
Bank: Our bank of turtledove. can talk with bp.haryadi?
Haryadi: yes I own.
Bank: we are only warned, corporate debt andakelola must immediately dilunasi.karna already fallen tempo.sebesar Rp.500.0000.000.000. and now your company confiscated.
Haryadi: what .. ?? Why did it happen??
Bank: if within 1 month you do not pay off your debts. we must seize the house and the remaining facilities.

Haryadi shock as it gets the bad news. He was looking for a way to get money to pay debts and and finance all the needs of her children, unbeknown bangkrut.ia anak2nya that he had phoned all his business associates. but all business partners already know that yandi already bangkrut.jadi they are reluctant to communicate with yandi.

Haryadi: hello yudis ...
yudis: sorry i was busy
yandi: ms.sesil hello can you help me?
Session: sorry sir I do not have many time today, please call me later.
In order to meet the needs of children yandi sell the remaining property that (car) .and she works in a pastry shop, every morning he went kaki.namun street children do not know the problems facing ayahnya.karna yandi hide it. And in the morning
El: father why the road, the car go?
Yandi: yes his car is being repaired, let father take a taxi
El: just use the car ka diamond
Intan: no, no, no ,,, I want jalan2 together tmen finished college later
Emi: This diamond ka ga same kasian what father, I wrote every day ngangkot.
Intan: bodo period .....
Yandi: uda ... alright ... father go first (greetings)

Single day went by, more and more time to pay off hutangpun dekat.yandipun Still trying to ruamahnya not participate consumed, and children do not know the problems that are befalling mereka.meski he knows hasilny far from enough to pay off the rest of its debts yandi keep working. In the daytime the debt collectors came home to remind time suadah dekat.bertemulah debt payment debt collector with anak2nya.

Debt: good afternoon
Intan: el .... there is a nohh ... cepet open door
El; Lunch ... looking Who is this?
Debt: what's true father ruamah yandi?
El: yes correctly, please enter ...
Emi; Who el?
El: don't know, try ka emi ask me want to drink first.
Emi: excuse me sir, there needs to be what ya with my dad ,? Because the father was at work.
Debt; Our of the turtledove bank debt just to remind the father must immediately pay off.
Diamond ; What ga ,,, maybe my father had a debt of my dad the successful entrepreneur!
Emi: if allowed to know how much debt our father?
Debt: approximately 7 billion more, because the rest of the company and all assets have been confiscated

If you are not able to pay for the house and its contents were forced confiscated as well.
Finally they also know the problems being faced by the father mereka.haripun already dusk, yandipun home, but the atmosphere was very quiet, not as usual, diamonds, emi and el, think about the problems facing their them.However father did not dare ask because fear of adding the burden of his father.

Yandi: assalamualaikum
Diamond, emi, el: wa'alaikumsallam ...... (concurrent responsibility)
El: father certainly cape, el buatin want tea?
Yandi: no el father would go straight to bed, because the cape.
In the evening diamond, emi, and el.merencanakan something, they will investigate where his father bekerje now.
In the morning.
Yandi: children's father left first well.
Intan: father if the car has not been repaired, wear just got diamonds first.
Emi; yes dad ... ka car wearing a diamond wrote first.
El; true, true, true,
Yandi: GPP ... father take a taxi.
Diamond, emi and trailed elpun where the father went. And they came in a pastry shop in a market, a place where their father work now. And they finally know, now their father was no longer a pengusaha.tapi only baker in a store.
In an evening of diamonds, emi and el talking danmerencanakan something to help his father.
El; kak ya father kasian
Emi; we emotion father help

Diamond ; yes I nyesel like wasteful!
emi; I want to take all the money saving me.
El; kak yes, I also want to sell all the goods and toys collection I
Diamond ; ok, I'm also going to sell cars, bags, clothes mahal2 me that I had.
Tomorrow we start selling yaa ....
Emi; yes, but do not let dad know you know!
The next day diamonds, emi, and el take the savings and sell all the precious things that they have to help the ayah.and turns out quite a lot of money collected from the savings and benda2 they sell.
One night in a room, they get together.
Intan: uda money we collected quite a lot ni.
El: yes ka, quite make the pilgrimage.
Emi: el .....
El; kidding .... hehehe ....
Diamond ; what if we buy a new car for a father?
Emi; ga importantly, what if boutique clothes ,,,
Diamond: the guy ... future father boutique
Emi; so what do you want?
El: want to eat cake ,,,, laperr .....
Intan: nahhh .... it was him.
Emi: What ka?
Diamond: the father working in a pastry shop, and good at making cakes, what if we make a small cake tokon?
Emi: may also ...

El; agree...
finally they are agreed to rent a place and make a pastry shop for businesses father.
In the morning.
Yandi; diamond, where is your car?
Diamond ; emmm enter the garage, well, breaking down.
Emi; fathers do not work first yes,
El; yeah yeah ,,,, because we want to invite the father to a place.
Yandi; Where
Diamond ; it's a secret
Yandi is very fond of children and he complied children.
And they came in a shop.
Yandi: you want to invite the father to eat cake right?
Intan: no,
Yandi: want to ask in teraktir buy a cake?
El: no father .....
Emi; This pastry shop has aya!
Yandi (expression)
Intan: forgive us father, so far we do not know the problems that fathers face, until one day there are those who come kerumah.dan bank from which we all know.
emi; we sell all valuables and take the savings we have to make this store for dad.
El: yes father, from now on we start all from zero .... like pertamina ... hehehee
Diamonds, emi; el ......................
Yandi; terimakasi my children ... my father proud of you.
 yandi and eventually helped her three daughters started a new life, and new businesses.
To achieve new things!

Drama 6 Persons

Drama 6 Persons

Kiki         : Vanny’s father

Herlita   : Vanny’s mother

Mela      : Vanny’s friend

Hertati  : Vanny’s rival

Vanny   : Main character

Yudis     : Hertati’s friend

Script Drama

Vanny is the only one child in her family, her school would like to conduct an art performance and they invite all of parents. All parents will come except Vanny’s parents, they are too busy but vanny really wants her parents come to this event to make a harmonic of her family come back, but her wish can’t be happened. More over, her parents become egoist and each other always debate in everything. They are divorce and what will be happen next? Let’s watch it.

Scene 1 in living room, evening

Vanny   : Mom, could you come to my school event, an art performance??

Lita         : so sorry honey can you go with your father? Okay, I’ll go socialite with my friends.

Vanny   : dad, my school invite you to come in art performance, will you come please?

Kiki         : go with your mother okay, honey go there with vanny please. You are her mother, so you have to go there. Okay

Lita         : and you her father.. So why not you who go there by her?? I need my private time. Why you always command to me whatever must be me.. that’s must be me,, this must be me?? All of thing must be me, me and me.

Kiki         : I’m a head of this family so I command you to go by her

Lita         : no, no, you .. who must to go by her

Kiki         : No, you .. this time youre turn.

Vanny   : stoooppp, you all always debate! Why not one of you succumb for me?? Nothing anyone here care to me..? I’m your child? What’s my mistake?? (go away and cry)

Kiki         : how you can be a good mother ? your girl wants you to go but why you ignor it?

Lita         : why don’t you who go there ? I’m busy, please understand me!

Kiki         : why you so difficult to handle?? Huh.!! (Break something)

Lita         : uh.. you’re tempramental man. I’m regret have choose you become my husband.

(kiki’s phone ringing on the table)

Lita         : hhmm who is called? It’s so noisy and annoyed me arrgg (answer the call)

hertati  : hai dear.. how about our dinner tonight baby ?? Absolutely you come right??halloo? Halloo? You so silent baby? honneeyy.. honneeyy(toot..toott.. end call)

kiki comeback

lita          : Daddy .. Who is call you..? Do you have affair with  another woman? ?? So is this your bustle ?

Kiki         : what do you mean?? Who’s calling to me??

Lita         : this is call from your girlfriend right??she said honey .. dear .. to you?? What does it mean?? I trust on you but you… you, You cruel (tear and strike him weakly)

Kiki         : i’m not cheating on you..

Lita         : LIE ! ..  You’re Lier !!

Kiki         : ahhh, okay if you don’t trust me again, i can’t continue this relationship.. oke I divorce you now !! (kiki leave her, lita shock and crying hardly)

Vanny   : Mom, why mom?

Lita         :  your daddy, vanny.. Your daddy cheating on me, honey..

Vanny   : What? Daddy cheating on you mom? Then, where’s daddy now , mom?

Lita         : he left us, honey. He left us for another woman.  hiks hiks

Vanny   : mommy (hug) hiks hiks.. Why it can be happened? Why daddy can do this to you mom? Hiks hiks..

Lita         : no problem honey, please be strong for me

Vanny   : hiks okay .. but please.. mom, don’t leave me alone yaa. I’m don’t have anyone else if you leave me also..

Lita         : yes, honey. You must be spirit. I hope you’ll not get soul-mate like your daddy.

The next day

Scene 2 in school, morning

(enter vanny and mela, vanny still looked sad about the separate of her parents and Hertati and yudhis are talking about vanny’s family, they’re so loud and make vanny more sad and angry)

Tati         : heyy guys… listen. Don’t you know?? There is a big news.. vanny’s mom and dad are separate now.. her father was cheating .. she is so pity yaa.. she is a BH child you know??

yudhis   : “BH” ??? what’s that??

Tati         : Ah, so old are you and how poor you are .. you don’t know what is “BH”? BH is “Broken Home” you know…

Yudhis   : Oh, Broken Home. So pity she is.. hmm how can she live with that family??

Tati         : aahh why you are so confuse with her life, just let her. And all of you guys don’t be near with her.. ! I remind you why because actually the broken home child’s life will be the same as their parents,, do you want to be the same as her?? Absolutely no right?? Okay.. don’t be her friend or you will be contagion from her.

(mela looked at vanny and vanny is holding her tear)

Mela      : be patient vanny, don’t hear what they said. You’re not alone. I’m here for you.

Vanny   : Thanks mel.

(vanny go out from the class and mela come to tati)

Mela      : hey.. tati .. yudhis.. why you mock her! If you were her don’t you sad to be of your joke.?

Tati         : eyy eyy.. don’t be a late hero.. what you know about her haaa??

Mela      : hey keep your mouth. This is not your business is her parents divorce or no. once you mocked her again.. I’ll talk to a headmaster because you have annoyed a student.

Yudhis   : huuu denunciator!!

Mela      : you.. just silent! (point him and go away)

Yud&tati              : yeaa… huuuu let’s go to canteen ( pull tati’s hand)

(Tati’s phone ringing)

Tati         : wait wait.. (put her hand’s out from yudhis)halooo my dear.. where have you been?? Hmm oke oke.. what ? do you want to pick me up? Ohh oke oke dear.. after finish school i’ll wait.. bye.. muuuach..

Yudhis   : who’s that??

Tati         : my lovely.

Yudhis   : oowhh let’s go

(Scene 3 : At Vanny’s House)

3 years later ...

All becomes different, Vanny more depression because her mother begins to make a relationship with a man, She still have traumatic about father’s figure, she become naughty and arrogant, Hertati and Yudhis become her bad friend who bring her fall in the black world.

Herlyta : halloo my darling.... my lovely.. sweety... do we have dinner?? Oh, thank you darling. I’ll  come to you. Waiting for me

Vanny   : (looks badmood while hearing her mother calling) mom I wanna go hangout with my friends..

Lita         : (end of calling) where do you wanna go? and with whom will you want to go hangout my little girl? Until what time will you back?

Vanny   : Hertati dan Vanny, discotic, until morning.

Herlita   : (shock) why you become unpolite now..?You’re talking with your mommy you know. Why you wanna go to discotic? Mommy not give you a permission.

Vanny   : Mom, I already mature now. So, that’s normal for me if i doing it. Mommy and daddy also  always  not give your time for me.

                                                (Mela knock the door in the same time she brings the food also)

Mela      : Excuse me Aunty, Vanny. This is several foods for you aunt and vanny

Lita         : Eh, Mela Please come in. (open the door)

Mela      :  My mom make some food for Aunty and Vanny .

Vanny   : You can eat it with my mom, cause i don’t need it (leave Mela and Herlita)

Lita         : Vanny ... you  ......

                                                (Mela comes to Vanny’s mom)

Mela      : Why aunty  sad ?

Herlita   : Aunty has failed become a mother. If aunty was not busy, Vanny woldn’t be like it. (crying)

Mela      : (bow)where’s Vanny now aunty?

Lita         : She said that she was hangout with her friends in the discotic. Please take Vanny back,Mela. Aunty won’t happened something worse with Vanny

Mela      : Yes, aunty. I go first aunty.

(Scene 4 : at discotic)

(Kiki is siting and waiting someone, tati and yudhis come to Kiki)

Hertati : hai my bunny sweety... sorry I’m late, is it wasting time for you?? (sit beside kiki)

Kiki         : no darling. I just arrive. Come here darling. (Want to kiss but vanny stop it)

Yudhis   : Vanny??

Vanny   : dady, Tati, so the fact ??? dady.. you know she is my friend.. and tati for this long time you already hurt my mother and me.. why you do this to me?? (tear and angry) why??

Tati         : shut up! From the first time I really don’t like you. You always get what you want, you always be the number one. Now this is my turn! I take your father because he love me and I love him also. And anyway your mother was no relation with him. So? If I love him is it wrong?

Yudhis   : enough tati, enough, don’t you ashame? Everybody have looked at us.

Tati         : never mind! Who’s invite her? You? (yudhis node his head and looked so afraid) Why you invite her??(higher)

Kiki         : okay honey calm down.. honey (said to tati) vanny why you’re here? Go away from here, you still kid. Go away or I will be so rude to you

Vanny   : what?? What do you want to do?? Do you wanna give me a slap?? Slap on my cheek.  Here.. come on…(pointing her cheek)

Tati         : Eh, you give a challenge yea.. don’t you afraid?? Hmm(more angry)

Vanny   : this is not your business. This is my business with my father!

Tati         : eh eh.. (tear out vanny’s hair)

Kiki         : (separate them and push vanny to go out) go, go away! (back to tati)

(vanny so sad and the weather become cold she hug her knie then the rain comes, behind her there was mela who bringing an umbrella and keeping vanny from the rain fall)

Mela      : oh god, vanny why are you here? You looked so sad? What happened?

(vanny look at mela and she more hardly sad, she hug mela and mela feel what she feel from her tear)

Mela      : okay okay.. I know this is so hard for you, but you know your mother really need you, you have to stronger for your mother..

Vanny   : mel.. don’t you know.. the fact,,?? My father have cheated with tati since long time ago… hiks hiks..

Mela      : ha? Astagfirullah.. be patient vanny.. this is not the end of world I know you can pass it. Come on let’s go home.

Scene  5 : Vanny’s room

( Vanny  listening music (family potrait – pink), she was remember the event yesterday night and  remembering what was happened last night.)

(Mela comes to Vanny’s house)

Mela      : Excuseme Aunty, is there Vanny?

Lita         : Vanny is in home now, Mela. (sweeping) Just come in to her room. Vanny not going out from her room since this morning. Aunty has knocked the door and Vanny not open the door. Please check it again, perhaps she wants open the door for you.

Mela      : Yes aunty, Excuse me

 (Mela knock the door and  heard loud song)

Mela      : Vanny, this is me, Mela. Open the door, please

(There’s no answer from Vanny)

Mela      : Vanny .... (knocking loudly)

(Mela become curiously and push the Vanny’s room door)

Mela      : Astagfirullah Vanny.... Wake up Vanny. Why you become like this?

(Hearing Mela screamed, Vanny’s mom come to Vanny’s room directly)

Lita         : VANNY ... !! Vanny .....Wake up,  little girl. Why you become like this??

Mela      : (checking Vanny body’s)  Sorry Aunty,  Vanny was passed away.

Lita         : Vanny ..... !!!  Don’t leave mommy. Forgive mommy if mommy don’t care to you. Mommy promise to you will not wasting you .Vanny wake up, please. Vanny, wake up. (shouting while crying)

Mela      : Must be patient aunty. It’s her fate.

Lita         : What’s wrong with you.don’t be a curious person. Hihihi (crying) Vanny is sleeping now. Wake up, little girl. Mom made your favorite food . Please eat your favorite food. Eat your favorite food, little girl Please wake up, little girl.

Mela      : Be patient aunty. (calling Tati and friends) hallo tati,, mela was passed away.. could you come to the last time?

Tati         : ok I’ll come.

Kiki         : what’s wrong??

Tati         : Vanny passed away, (Kiki shocked) let’s go there.

(Hertati, Yudhis, and Kiki Go to the Stage)

Kiki         : (berlutut and crying) Forgive daddy , Vanny

Herlita   : Hi, long time no see. You still miss us? Look, our child is sleeping now. She already mature right?  She is be a pretty girl now.

                Hey !! You’re cruel !! You don’t remember your mistake ?!

(Vanny and friends go out from the stage, except Herlita)

Herlita   : (tie the hair and feel something disappear). Must be beautiful 2x…..

                Eh, Where is my baby ??? Baby, Where are you??? Baby?? (go out from stage)

Tati and friends come also her father, they are regret was so cruel to vanny for long time, not only her friends or her father who regret it, her mother, Herlita also regret was not to be a good mother for her. She becomes crazy and she sent to hospital to get many treatment, vanny was died tragically, she is a victim of her parents’ egoism, she just wanted her family care but her parents was ignored her, perhaps if her parents give a little attention, spend a little time to her, and her father keep their love it can not to be unlucky destiny for them.

FINISH !!!